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第5章 分“照猫画虎”——控制性写作(5)

I bought Mickey from a pet shop about two years ago.He is very tame.I often play with him when I return home from school.I love watching Mickey run about and make funny little noises.I feed him with rice and vegetable twice a day.

When my friends come to my house, they enjoy playing hide——and——seek with Mickey.They always tell me that I have a clever pet.I love Mickey very much.

Presentation

1.Read the model text carefully.仔细阅读范文。

2.Try to draw some pictures of the animals which can be kept as pets.尝试画出你喜爱的宠物。

3.Tell the general description of these animals,e.g.characteristics,sounds,food,etc.说出这些宠物的特征(容貌、声音、习性)及喜欢的食物等。

How they lookWhat they do What they eat

Puppy (dog)droopy ears long tail brown fur.bark wag his tailmeat rice Rabbit long ears bushy tail white furhop about make funny noisecarrots, turnips vegetables green grass Tortoise tiny head short tail hard shellcrawl hide his headleaf vegetables worms fish food Parrot long beak a pair of wings white featherstalk flap his wingsgrains fruit Monkeysmall ears , big eyes long arms and a long tail swing in the tree, stand on my shoulder, play some tricksfruit, grain nuts beans.

4.Choose and decide on one of the above animals which you would like to keep as your pet.Remember to give your pet a name.选择一种作为你要养的宠物,记住给它起个好听的名字。

5.Write your composition My Pet——a brown tortoise, tightly following the same structure, paragraphing and tense in the model passage.仿照范文的结构、段落和时态写题为 My Pet ——a brown tortoise的作文。

Writing activity 写作活动

My Pet——a brown tortoise

Para.1.Fill in the blanks.填空

Some of us keep as a hobby.My pet is a and his name is .He has and .His body is covered with .

Para.2.Complete the sentences.完成句子

I bought .He is now .I often .

I love watching.I feed him with .

Para.3.Continue the paragraph using the helping words:用所给词汇完成第三段。

come houseenjoyplayingclever love

When my friends

.

Model Passage 6

At A Restaurant

A restaurant serves food.It is usually decorated and air——conditioned.Restaurant food, however, is expensive.

One evening, Mr and Mrs Chen went to a restaurant for dinner.They sat down and a waitress (waiter) showed them the menu.They looked at the menu and Mr Chen ordered their food.The waitress took down the order and went away.Later she returned with the food.She served the food before she went away again.

Mr and Mrs Chen enjoyed their dinner.After their meal, Mr.Chen asked for the bill.The waitress brought him the bill on a small tray.Mr.Chen looked at the bill and paid up.Then he walked to the door with his wife.The waitress thanked them.

Presentation

1.Read the model text carefully and try to retell it.

仔细读范文,然后复述。

2.Pay attention to the structures and tenses in the three paragraphs.注意三段的组织结构和时态。

3.Write about another eating place as a parallel text for composition.

依据范文的结构联系,写另一个吃饭的场所。

Title(标题): At A Night Hawker Center

4.Write the new text following the use of paragraphs, content and tenses along lines similar to those of the above model text.仿照范文,写出三段内容。

5.Words might be used in the new text: 参考词汇

night hawker center夜市中心decorated 装饰 foodstall 小吃摊order 点菜dumplings水饺noodles面条 watermelon 西瓜

Writing activity 写作活动

At a Night Hawker Center

A night hawker center .

many foodstalls at .Hawker food .

One Mr and Mrs Liu went

.First, they .

Next,.Chinese dumplings, long noodles.Then

seats.

A while later,

After their meal,

.

Model Passage 7

The Honest Taxi Driver

Wang Bing was a taxi driver.He was patient and always friendly towards his passengers.He lived in Yinchuan.

One afternoon, Wang Bing washed his taxi.To his surprise, he found a brief——case on the back seat.He opened the briefcase and found some important documents (papers) and a diary in it.

Without a moment’s delay, he drove to the address shown in the diary.He showed the brief——case to the lady who opened the door for him.She recognized her husband’s briefcase.He returned the briefcase and the lady thanked him.Before he left, the lady asked for his name and address.

That night when Wang Bing returned home as usual, his wife handed him an envelope with a note and fifty yuan in it.He had received a reward for his honesty.

Presentation

1.Read the model passage carefully.仔细阅读范文。

2.Try to retell the passage.复述范文。

3.Write a similar passage entitled The Honest Hawker

用范文的组织结构、时态仿写

4.Write the new text in four paragraphs 写四段

Words given as a guide.各段的引导词汇

(1) hawker hardworkingcustomers beef——noodles

(2) cleaning handbag closeda bundle of 100——yuan notes identity——card

(3) an hour later address shownold ladyrecognizedthanked stall number

(4) as usual her son handed reward honesty

Writing activity 写作活动

The Honest Hawker

(1) Bai Yongchun was a hawker.He .

He sold at .

(2)One evening, was cleaning .

To his surprise,.He and found .

At once,.

(3),the address shown .He showed the old lady who .She recognized

.Bai Yongchun and .Before he left, the old lady .

(4)The next evening, Bai Yongchun

.The old lady with his son.(How the son rewarded Bai Yongchun, free writing)

.

Model Passage 8

Collecting Puppets

Mr.Liu has an unusual hobby.He collects puppets and he also makes them.

Mr.Liu started to collect puppets when he was twelve years old.In thirty years, he has collected over two hundred Chinese puppets.

When Mr.Liu got married, he bought a large old house.There he keeps his puppets in the large underground room of the house.He is very proud of his collection.Some of the puppets are very old.Mr.Liu repairs the old and torn puppets himself.

Presentation

1.Read the passage silently and try to retell it.

默读、复述范文

2.The title of the parallel text 习作对应标题

Title: Collecting Kites

3.Writing guidance.写作指导

Mr.Tan’s hobby collects kites

Age when he started to collect kitesfourteen

No.of years he has collected kites twenty——six

No.of kites he has collectedmore than 100

Type of house Mr.Tan builta two——story house

Place where he keeps his kitesa spare room on the top

4.Write the new text following the example of the comprehension passage “Collecting Puppets”

or organization and paragraphing.

仿照范文的组织结构和段落完成作文

5.Write in the simple present and simple past tense.

用一般现在时和一般过去时

Writing activity 写作活动

(1)Mr.Tan has an .He collects,and he also.

(2)Mr.Tan start when In,he .

(3)When

Model Passage 9

A Visit to Liu Ying’s House

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