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第9章 分“照猫画虎”——控制性写作(9)

A plastic bag was found in the school dining hall this morning.There is a key to the door, a dictionary and some other belongings in the bag.Will the owner come to the guard office of the Girls’ Apartment Building to claim it? The contact telephone number is 5033777.

Presentation:

1.Study the passage carefully and know how to write a Found.仔细阅读范文,研究如何写招领启事

2.Write a similar Found according to the following

information.根据提示,写一则类似的招领启事

Found: a handbag

Things in: a bundle of keys, a mobile phone and a lot of money

Place: at the entrance of the school

Writing Activity 写作活动

Found

A was found.

There is Will the owner

Model Passage 6

Welcome to our Music club.This club was set up two years ago.Dozens of people have joined it.Many of them are middle school students.Every Sunday morning, students from different schools gather around here.Some young people from other parts often join us.We practise singing and playing music instruments.We also exchange our experience in music study.We all have a good time here.

I like the club very much because I have learned a lot from it.It is a good help to my life.

That’s all.Thank you.

Presentation

1.Read the passage and analyze how to write a welcome speech.仔细阅读范文,研究怎样写欢迎词

2.Write a similar welcome speech by completing the sentences.紧随范文,完成下面的空挡,使文章通顺

Writing activity 写作活动

Welcome to our English corner.This

Hundreds .

Many of them .

Every .

We also

Model Passage 7

Dear editor,

Recently we are concerned about a new chemical works which will be soon built near our school.

In our school, most students, including me, are against the construction of the chemical works near our school.

Although the works will make a lot of money for our town, we do think it will do us more harm than good.The drinking water will be polluted.The air over the town will also be polluted.How can we live in such a place where there is no fresh air to breathe, where we can play games and have sports after class?

In a word, it is not wise to build such a works near our school.

Presentation

1.Read and analyze the above passage carefully

仔细阅读范文并作分析

2.What to write 所写内容

Your opinion: against

Your reasons: pollute the air and water, no fresh air to breathe, no place to have sports

Your conclusion: not wise to build.

3.Write a similar composition about the construction of a paper factory in your village 用范文的结构、段落和时态写关于在你村建一家造纸厂的反映意见

1)Your opinion: against

2)Your reasons: pollute water and air, do great harm to crops, have no clean water to drink

Writing Activity 写作活动

Dear Head of the county government,

I am the head of Zhuying Village.Recently

.

In our village,.

Although,

we do think it

The drinking water and the air .

It will certainly do great harm .

How can we ?

In a word,

.

Model Passage 8

Giving up Smoking

Now many students smoke and the number has been increasing.It is reported that over one third of the students in a certain school smoke and some even steal money to buy cigarettes.It is really a serious problem for so many students to smoke.

As we know, smoking is very harmful to our health.For us teenagers, it does greater harm not only to our health but also to our minds.

Middle school students are the future builders of our motherland.We should devote our time to learning things useful and valuable for our country, for our people and for ourselves as well.So those who smoke should get rid of such a bad habit and form some good ones.

Presentation

1.Read the above passage carefully.仔细阅读理解范文

2.Analyze what are written in each paragraph.

分析各段所写内容

Para1.tells the fact on smoking

Para2.tells the bad effect of smoking

Para3.tells what we should do, what we shouldn’t do

3.Use the same method to write the parallel composition: Saying good——bye to the Internet Bar

用范文的写作方法完成题为《告别网吧》的文章

Use the following information:三段写作提示

Paragraph 1.fact: more than one——third in certain schools go to Internet Bars, do not go to school but stay in Internet Bars, even steal money,

Paragraph 2.tells about the bad effect of going to the Internet Bar too often

Paragraph 3.tells what we should do, what not.

Writing Activity 写作活动

Saying good——bye to the Internet Bar

Para1.Fill in blanks

Now many students go on lines in the

without going to school.The number has been .

It is said that more than of the students in a certain go to Internet Bars.Some students even do not go to or even steal to go on lines there.It is really a for so to go to the Internet Bars.

Para2.Complete the sentences:

As we know, our study.For us students,

Paragraph3.(Free)

We students are the future

.

Model Passage 9

Dear editor,

My name is Xu Ming.I am a student living in a beautiful village called Baima Village.Our village lies at the foot of a hill with a river passing by.In the past, all kinds of crops grew well and there used to be many green trees around.Fish in the pond were fit and fat.Everything looked beautiful and it was a nice place to live in.But everything has changed since a paper factory was built near our village two years ago.Every day it pours out a lot of waste water.The terrible pollution has done great harm not only to our crops but also to our health.The crops, trees, even many fish die of the polluted water.And we cannot get clean water to drink.Many people often get ill.We really suffer a lot from the pollution.

We do hope some measures will be taken to stop the pollution.

Yours truly,

Xu Ming

Presentation

1.Read carefully and analyze the passage.

仔细阅读并分析范文

2.Comparison:过去与现在的对比

In the past Now

1.crops, trees, fish grew well, 2.a nice place to live in1.crops, trees, fish die 2.people have no clean water to drink, often get ill

3.Write a similar letter to editor about a chemical works near your school, using the following information:

用范文的写作方法,给编辑写一篇文章,反应关于在你校附近建一家化工厂的情况,提示如下:

In the past Now

1.green trees and all kinds of beautiful flowers on campus, like a beautiful garden, 2.a nice place to study in1.produce a lot of waste and noise, 2.do harm to health, 3.affect teaching and studying activities

Writing activity 写作活动

Dear editor,

My name is .I’m a student of .Our school is located at .There used to be

.

But everything

Every day

The terrible pollution .And the great noise from the factory

.

We do hope something must be

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