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第23章 模板作文赏析(4)

The move-out of our students changes our society a lot On one hand,being students in foreign universities will widen their view and offer them more possibility to get favorite jobs.And consequently their success will draw more latecomers to do the same thing.On the other hand,if the majority of them will not go back to China to work in the future,our fatherland will probably suffer a signifcant loss which may be diffcult to be estimated by money.

妙语评析:这篇议论文首先提出要议论的论题,然后在第二段列举了出现这一现象的种种原因,并逐一分析,又在第三段从多方面阐述这一现象可能带来的影响,说明它对社会的改变是很大的。

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1.Recent years______

2.Instead,______

3.There are several reasons to______,First of all,______Moreover,______,Besides,______

4.On one hand,______On the other hand,______

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Recent years______that more and more______,They have not considered______as______,Instead,______

There are several reasons to______,First of all,______Moreover,______,esides,

On one hand,______On the other hand,______

Directions:For this part,you are allowed 30minutes to write a composition of no less than 150words on the topic“Should College Students Be Allowed to Get Married?”and you‘re your article on the following outline.

1.有些人赞成学生结婚

2.有些人反对

3.你的观点

范文欣赏

Should College Students Be Allowed to Get Married?

There is no denying the fact that it is a hotly debated topic today whether college students should be allowed to get married.Some time ago,the ban was lifted by some universities on students getting married.To this people’s attitudes differ sharply.Some hold the positive view.They say that most college students are adults and that it is a basic right for those who have reached the appropriate ages to get married.Besides,they argue that with their biological and emotional needs met,these students will study better.The ban on this means a severe violation of human rights.

Many others,however,hold the negative opposite view.They claim that the university or college is a place to study instead of a community to lead family life.Allowing college students to get married would adversely affect their study.For instance,they would spend too much time attending their family and love,unable to concentrate on their school work.

As far as I am concerned,Weighing the arguments of both sides,I believe that it is fne to allow college students to get married.Anyway,this is their freedom.Actually,we don‘t have to worry too much because facts have shown that most college students would choose not to get married in the face of such ferce competition and heavy school work.

(或As far as I am concerned,Weighing the arguments of both sides,I believe that college students should not be allowed to get married.Though mostly adults,they are actually immature psychologically.Their wishes to get married are,more often than not,impulses.Besides,as students,they are not ready to support a family fnancially.妙语评析:第一段先提出论点和一部分人对此事的观点,第二段提出另一部分截然相反的观点,并进行阐述,在最后一段说明自己的态度和看法,做了客观的评价。

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1.There is no denying the fact that______

2.Some time ago,______,To this people’s attitudes differ sharply.Some hold the positive view.

3.Besides,they argue that______

4.Many others,however,hold the negative opposite view______.

5.As far as I am concerned,______

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There is no denying the fact that______Some time ago,______,To this people‘s attitudes differ sharply.Some hold the positive view.

Besides,they argue that______Many others,however,hold the negative opposite view.

As far as I am concerned,______I believe that______Actually,______

Directions:For this part,you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic Should Students Get Married?

如何看待在校大学生结婚的问题

1)国家允许在校学生结婚

2)在校学生结婚对本人的影响

3)你的观点(本人认为在校生的结婚行为不应加以禁止,但也不应该提倡,毕竟在校生的主要目的是学习,结婚势必会影响学业,相信目前绝大部分的学生都会理性的看待这一问题)

范文欣赏

Should Students Get Married?

There is a newly dissension putting forward these days:Is it legally allowed for Chinese on-campus students to get married before they complete their courses?Some people prefer“yes”while some others prefer“no”.Certainly a large number of people just cannot decide which side they should be stand.

In fact,the governments allow on-campus students to get married before they complete their course.There isn’t a regulation proclaimed in writing to forbid marriage of on-campus students.But it must affect those triers.

In my opinion,it is unnecessary to forbid on-campus students to get married before they fnished their college,however,it shouldn‘t be advocated or encouraged,because,for on-campus students,they play the role as learners.their main task is to learn,if they married,their school work must be affected and they may not graduate favorably or may not be capable of future works.So,I believe:almost all on-campus students would deal with the question reasoningly.

妙语评析:文章首先把论点提出,并先简要概述对这一论点的不同看法,即有些人同意而有些人不同意。然后再分别阐述这两种不同的观点。最后提出自己的观点,并说出自己的希望:相信大家能理性的对待这一问题。

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1.There is a newly dissension putting forward these days:_______________

2.some people prefer_______________while some others prefer_______________.

3.In my opinion,it is unnecessary to_______________however,it shouldn’t_______________because,for_______________

4.So,I believe:_______________

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There is a newly dissension putting forward these days:_______________some people prefer_______________while some others prefer_______________.

In my opinion,it is unnecessary to_______________however,it shouldn‘t_______________because,for_______________

So,I believe:_______________

Directions:For this part,you are allowed 30minutes to write a short essay entitled Fast Food and Traditional Chinese Cooking.You should write at least 150words following the outline given below:

1.很多人越来越喜欢西式快餐,如麦当劳(McDonald)、肯德基(KFC)。

2.你更喜欢西式快餐还是传统的中餐?

3.你的看法是……

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