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第26章 模板作文赏析(7)

Directions:for this part,you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic a letter to the university president about the canteen service campus.You should write at least 150words and you should base your composition on the outline below:

假如你是李明,请你就本学校食堂的状况给校长写一封信,内容应包括:食堂的饭菜质量、价格、环境、服务等,可以是表扬,也可以是批评建议,也可以都有。

范文欣赏

Dear Mr.president,

This letter comes to you from one of your students.In it,some opinions are put forward for you to refect upon.

As you know,our students are the main customers of the university canteen.but unfortunately,we don‘t fnd the service there satisfying sometimes.The food is not as nutritious as it should be.As a result,some of us become thinner and weaker at university.Besides,sometimes the canteen people just bring us steamed bread with their dirty bare hands.And what’s more,the fare is also a little higher at university.

Some people may argue that measures have been taken and things are improving there.For instance,IC cards have taken the place of money in the canteen,and the attitude of the service people is also changing.But in my opinion,progress is not so quick and thorough.

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

妙语评析:文章中第一段首先说明自己的身份是一个学生,希望能引起读者的注意,然后再第二段开始论述自己所发现的问题,以及人们对此的看法。最后一段说出了自己对此事件的想法。

句型模板

1.this letter comes to you from_______________.

2.as you know,_______________.but unfortunately,_______________.

3.some people may argue that_______________.

4.But in my opinion,_______________

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Dear××,

this letter comes to you from_______________some opinions are put forward for you to refect upon.

As you know,_______________.but unfortunately,_______________.As a result,_______________

Some people may argue that_______________.For instance,_______________

But in my opinion,_______________

Yours sincerely,

×××

Directions:For this part,you are allowed 30minutes to write a composition of about 150words.Write a letter to the Law Department in a university to apply for the M.A.course of business law.

范文欣赏

Dear Sir or Madam,

I read with great interest the information of graduate studies in your university.I am particularly interested in the course of business law.

I am writing to apply for the M.A.course of business law beginning in October,2014.I am a student of the Law School of ABC University where I have had four years‘study of civil law,criminal law,administrative law,environmental law,constitutional law,business law and many other subjects.During those four years in college,I have passed all the required courses of study with satisfactory marks.Enclosed herewith is a certified copy of my academic report form the department concerned.You will notice that I obtained very excellent results in business law.I have always found business law an interesting subject.I would like to further my study inthis feld at your prestigious university.

I therefore request more detailed information for the course.Thank you in advance for your prompt attention to this.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

妙语评析:这封信在开头就点明自己对该校所感兴趣的专业,第二段详细叙述自己申请该专业的理由,曾经所获得的成绩,最后提出自己的希望,很愿意去该校学习深造。

句型模板

1.I read with great interest the information of_______________

2.I am writing to apply for_______________

3.I would like to_______________at your prestigious university.

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Dear××,

I read with great interest the information of_______________

I am writing to apply for_______________I have passed_______________You will notice that_______________I have always found_______________I would like to_______________at your prestigious university.

I therefore_______________

I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours sincerely,

×××

Directions:For this part,you are allowed 30minutes to write a composition of about 150words.Write a letter to James about the hurricane.

范文欣赏

Dear James,

In today’s newspaper,I read about the recent events in your town and I am writing to extend my deepest condolences.

It broke my heart to see all those pictures of those whose homes have been destroyed in the tragic hurricane.I couldn‘t believe my eyes when I saw a little girl crying on the roof of her house asking for help.I am really worried about you and your family,and all your friends there.I am crossing my fngers for you now in hopes that you are all safe and sound.

I can only imagine how difficult this time must be for you,and I want to extend to you my unwavering support.Our government and many nongovernmental organizations are initiating various campaigns to urge people to donate money and necessary things to send to America.I donated all my allowance that I have been saving for years.

I feel extremely sorry for this tragedy,and I will be looking forward to hearing from you.Please pass my concern to your parents.

Yours sincerely,

Meng Fei

妙语评析:信的开头先说明了自己是如何获得消息的,然后表达了自己的深切同情,第二段又详细地描述了自己所看到的悲惨景象,发出感慨,并表示将竭尽所能地帮助他们渡过难关。

句型模板

1.In today’s newspaper,I read about_______________and I am writing to_______________

2.I couldn‘t believe my eyes when_______________

3.I am really worried about_______________

4.I can only imagine_______________

5.I feel extremely sorry for_______________

全文模板

Dear×××,

In today’s newspaper,I read about_______________and I am writing to_______________

I couldn‘t believe my eyes when_______________I am really worried about_______________I can only imagine_______________

I feel extremely sorry for_______________Please pass my concern on to_______________

Yours sincerely,

×××

开幕词

范文欣赏

Ladies and gentlemen,

Good morning,welcome to Beijing!To begin with,I would like to make a brief introduction to myself.I am the president of Motorola(China)Electronics Ltd.

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