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第28章 模板作文赏析(9)

During the past two years at university,I’ve taken over 18compulsory and optional course,and have according improved my ability of English listening,speaking,reading,writing and translation considerably.Besides,I have learned a lot about foreign relations and trade.At leisure,I always try to grasp every precious opportunity to practice English with native speakers.As a matter of fact,I‘ve already tried some translation and interpretation jobs.I once worked as a temporary interpreter at the East China Export Commodities Fair.In addition,during the past two years,I have been working as a part-time tour guide.My jobs offered me good opportunities to improve my English and work competence and I enjoy them very much.

Two weeks from now,I will be on holiday again.If you can grant me the honor to work for your company as a secretary for two months,I’d feel obliged.Thank you for reading my application letter.I‘m looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Zhang Ying

妙语评析:信在第一段先简要介绍了自己的情况,然后说明了自己是如何得到招聘信息的,在信的第二段介绍自己的学习情况,以及自己所拥有的能力,表示自己能胜任这份工作,最后表达自己很希望得到这份工作,期盼回复。

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1.I read in_______________that you are looking for_______________

2.During_______________,I’ve taken over_______________and_______________,and have according improved my ability of_______________Besides,I have learned_______________In addition,_______________If you can_______________for your company as a_______________for_______________,I‘d feel obliged.Thank you for.I’m looking forward to your reply.

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Dear xxx,

I read in_______________that you are looking for_______________

During_______________,I‘ve taken over_______________and_______________,and have according improved my ability of_______________Besides,I have learned_______________In addition,

Yours,

XXX

Directions:For this part,you are allowed 30minutes to write a composition.You should write at least 150words and you should base your composition on the outline below:

1.你认为自己具备了什么条件(能力、性格、爱好等)可以胜任学生会主席的工作

2.如果当选,你将为本校同学做些什么

范文欣赏

Good evening Ladies and Gentlemen.Thank you for coming to this election campaign today.With the trust and complete support of my team,I am delighted to announce that I am running for chairman of the Student Union.

As a diligent man with pleasant personality,I have been always considered to be a good team member.Meanwhile,as a big fan of sports I fully realize the importance of teamwork and advocate the spirit of being quicker and stronger.I possess strong determination to take frm steps toward achieving the objectives of my team.In addition,my working experience with the Student Union in the past two years will be extremely helpful to my future work here if I get elected.

A sign of a really strong organization is that it can change its leadership without hindering its progress and without damaging its values.If I am elected,I believe I have the capability to lead the Union to advance in the right direction.I will cooperate well with my fellow members of the Union and take innovative measures,including establishing a student-information center,forming a teacher-student-friendship association,to make the Union a true assistance to students’study and life here as well as a bridge of communication between teachers and students.

Thank you very much.

妙语评析:第一段首先对同学们的到来表示欢迎,然后说明自己要竞选学生会主席,在第二段开始叙述自己竞选学生会主席所具备的条件,经历,第三段说明如果自己竞选成功,将会给同学们做哪些实事,相信自己能胜任这一职务。

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1.Thank you for coming to_______________

2.With the trust and complete support of_______________,I am delighted to announce that_______________

3.As a_______________with pleasant personality,I have been always considered to be_______________.Meanwhile,as a_______________I fully realize_______________

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Good evening Ladies and Gentlemen,

Thank you for coming to_______________With the trust and complete support of_______________,I am delighted to announce that_______________As a_______________with pleasant personality,I have been always considered to be_______________.Meanwhile,as a_______________I fully realize A sign of a really strong organization is that_______________If I am elected,I believe_______________

Thank you very much.

Direction:for this part,you are allowed 30miutes to write a letter.You write at least 150words and base your composition on the outline(given in Chinese)below:

1.给小何写信感谢他接待你在云南旅游

2.回忆美好的旅行经历

3.邀请小何来你的家乡做客

范文欣赏

June 17th,2014

Dear Xiao He,

Thank you ever so much for having invited me for the tour of Yunnan,your home province.I had a fantastic time with you and your family.Your great hospitality will be unforgettable throughout my life.

When I think of those gorgeous places of scenic beauty you showed me around,I couldn‘t be more delighted.And the pineapple pie Grandma prepared for me is out of this world.I had never had so delicious food!Indeed,I am still missing your snug log-cabin,small and cozy,which was turned into my dream house in fairy land those nights.

Would you come to Harbin,my home town,some time this summer vacation?Harbin,a beautiful place frequently referred to as Oriental Paris,offers a picture of another kind.I can assure you another pleasant tour.My family and I cannot wait tosee you here.

Yours,

Li Ming

妙语评析:信的开头先写了对上次小何邀请自己去云南旅游表达自己的感谢,然后回忆自己喜欢的地方,让自己难以忘怀的事情,最后邀请对方来自己的家乡哈尔滨做客,并简单介绍了哈尔滨值得旅游的地方。

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1.Thank you ever so much for_____

2.When I think of_____I couldn’t be more delighted.

3.Indeed,I am still_____

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Topic

Thank you ever so much for_____

When I think of_____I couldn‘t be more delighted.Indeed,I am still_____

Would you come to_____,_____a beautiful place I can assure you another pleasant tour._____

假期即将到来,你(付萍)打算做一次为期三周的旅行,希望找个外国朋友作为游伴(Travel-mate)。拟一个寻游伴的启示,交代清楚日程安排、费用分担情况、对对方的要求,说明对方和你一起出游的好处。

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