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第31章 模板作文赏析(12)

It will exert a profound influence upon the_____.With reference to my standpoint,_____

Directions:For this part,you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic Television.You should write at least 150words.

范文欣赏

Television

The impact of Television In recent years,with the development of science and technology,80percent of all homes in China have satellite TV,offering as many as 50channels.It has caused a heated debate on the impact of television on children.

Many parents are worried about the impact of so much television on children.The factors for parents’worry is that children are indulge in television and spend too much time on it.First of all,with so many programs to choose from,children are not getting as much exercise as they should.Then,there comes acase that some studies have show that excessive watching of television by millions of children has lowered their ability to achieve in school.Moreover,the effect on children‘s minds are more serious than the effect on children’s bodies.Especially when the children are too small to judge what programs are suit to them.

Indeed,these unique points can be connected to remind parents that they should pay close attention to and responsibilities for supervising their children‘s TV viewing In this way,children will not be infuenced too deeply.

妙语评析:文章在第一段先说电视的普及性和它对社会产生的影响,尤其是对孩子产生的影响,然后在第二段从多个方面论述令很多家长担心的电视对孩子的影响,最后一段阐述作者对此的看法。

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1.The impact of_____In recent years

2.It has caused a heated debate on_____

3.Many parents are worried about_____on_____

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Topic

The impact of_____In recent years It has caused a heated debate on_____any parents are worried about_____on_____First of all,_____Then,_____Moreover,_____Especially when_____

Indeed,_____In this way,_____

Directions:For this part,you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic Environmental Pollution.You should write at least 150words

范文欣赏

Environmental pollution

Most of us today recognize that environmental pollution has been a greatly serious problem.Lots of plants trees corps are destroyed by bad air.Many fsh die of poisonous water.Thousands of people die from eating poisoned fsh or breathing ingas.Therefore,environmental pollution should be responsible for these diseases that are disabling,or bringing death not only to human beings,but also to wild life.

From above,we can fnd that the reasons why environment are polluted more and more seriously are as follows.The primary reason,I think,is the reason of harmful substances into environment.For example,to prevent insects,farmers make use of great amounts of insecticides,so as to have bumper harvests.However,they pollute air,water and land.Second,the gas coming from the car engines and factories also make environment polluted badly.The third reason actually is the result of a growing population in the world.Everyday,so much litter and waste are poured out from houses,also pollute the environment.The signifcance for controlling pollution noted that it’s high time that more effective measures should be taken.

Therefore,new laws should be passed to limit the amount of pollutants from factories.Moreover,in the households,there is an obvious need to reduce litter and waste.Let‘s make our good efforts,and the world will be a safer place to live for us.

妙语评析:这是一篇说明环境污染严重性的文章,在第一段先说明了环境污染所造成的危害,污染空气,污染水,第二段主要把造成环境污染的三个原因讲述出来,最后一段是作者提出的倡议,希望我们大家一起努力优化环境。

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1.Most of us today recognize that_____Therefore_____not only_____but also_____

2.From above,we can fnd that_____

3.The primary reason,I think,is_____for example,_____however,_____Second,_____The third reason actually is_____

4.Therefore,_____moreover,_____

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Most of us today recognize that_____Therefore_____not only_____but also_____

From above,we can fnd that_____

The primary reason,I think,is_____for example,_____however,_____Second,_____The third reason actually is_____

Therefore,_____moreover,_____Let’s make our good efforts,_____

Directions:For this part,you are allowed 30minutes to write a composition on the topic:Fascinating China.You should write at least 150words according to the situation given below in Chinese:

一位外国朋友第一次来中国,他想让你介绍两三样极具中国特色的事物(可以是风俗文化等),你会向他介绍什么?如何介绍?

范文欣赏

Fascinating of China

China,one of the cradles of human civilization,possesses so many treasures with Chinese characteristics that numerous foreign friends come to visit her.The frst place to go to is,the Great Wall,which is the symbol of China and one of the seven wonders in the world.In the imperial periods,it was used in defense of the dynasties.Since liberation,it has become a place of interest.There is a famous saying:“He who does not reach the Great Wall isn‘t a true man.”

China is home to Panda,an animal with only two colors,white and black,but very cute.It’s a national treasure,often functioning as a friendly diplomat.

The Terracotta warriors and Horses are unearthed in Xi‘an,a famous ancient city-were sculptured in Qin Dynasty,the frst dynasty of China.When former U.S.President Clinton came to China,he visited here frst.

The above mentioned are just a wave of the sea.If you want to know more about this ancient nation,come and be our guest.

妙语评析:这篇文章介绍了中国两样极具特色的事物,第一段介绍了古迹长城,说明了长城是中国的标志,并在最后引用俗语说明长城的闻名。第二段介绍了国宝大熊猫及兵马俑,最后一段表示欢迎外国友人来中国做客。

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1.The frst place to go to is_____

2.What’s more,it is said to_____

3.China is home to_____

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Topic

The frst place to go to is_____which is the symbol of China.What‘s more,it is said to_____China is home to_____It’s our national treasure.

If you want to know more about_____,come and be our guest

Directions:For this part,you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic The Tape Recorder.You should write at least 150words.

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