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2.Without it,we would become________

3.At that time,________So neither________nor________

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It very necessary to________Without it,we would become________

At that time,________So neither________nor________For example,________The same things happen in________and in________

Being________,I must compete with other________in our________.

Directions:For this part,you are allowed 30minutes to write a composition on the topic“The Career I Pursue”.You composition should be based on your own understanding of the topic and it should be no less than 150words.

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The Career I Pursue

Unlike many other college students,I thought long and hard about my future before embarking on my studies.I then sought advice from my teachers and my parents about the best life path for me to choose.Finally,I settled on journalism as the career which would best suit my temperament.

Although the fnancial rewards has two particular attractions for me.First,by supplying people with the information they need every day,it fulflls a socially useful function.Second,it is a job full of novelty,unlike most occupations,which involve simply routine work.

In order to prepare myself for my future career in the world of the media—whether it be working for a newspaper or a magazine,or in the sphere of radio and television—I have carefully selected my college course.My basic fields of study are Mass Communications and Economics.At the same time,having an eye to reporting events worldwide,I am taking extra classes to improve my English and reading widely to increase my general knowledge.

妙语评析:这篇文章主要介绍了自己的理想职业,在第一段先将自己选择这一职业的理由讲述出来,他的性格特征比较适合从事新闻业的工作,第二段写了新闻业在哪些方面吸引了我,最后一段表明自己要想将来从事有关新闻业的工作就要认真学习,为将来打好基础。

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1.Unlike________,I thought long and hard about________

2.Although________First,________Second,________

3.In order to________At the same time,________

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Unlike________,I thought long and hard about________

Although________First,________Second,________

In order to________At the same time,________I am taking________toimprove________

Directions:For this part,you are allowed 30minutes to write a composition on the topic“Internet—A Two-edged Sword”.You composition should be based on your own understanding of the topic and it should be no less than 150words.

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Internet—A Two-edged Sword

Internet is playing an increasingly important role in people’s life.As a newborn information delivering system,the Internet has made seas of information available at our fingers‘tips.Besides,the Internet serves as the most convenient means for communication.Through the Internet,people can discuss various problems and make friends who share common views.

But just as a coin has two sides,Internet has its own drawbacks which should not be neglected.First,it costs an alarming amount of money to construct the system and the cost is very high to most Chinese consumers.Second,it is sometimes diffcult for people to find the right information they are looking for since there is too much rubbish on the net.Finally,it is also diffcult to prevent the net from the invasion of criminals.

Therefore,the Internet should be viewed as a two-edged sword,which presents us with both conveniences and troubles.But we should not give up eating for fear of choking.The best policy,as I see it,is to further develop the net and exert proper supervision over it so that it can beneft us in a better way.

妙语评析:这是篇说明互联网影响的文章,第一段先说明互联网在人们生活中扮演的重要角色,它使人们的沟通更加便捷,第二段从反面又说明互联网对人们的生活造成的负面影响,最后一段说明互联网是个双刃剑,我们应该让互联网健康发展。

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1.________is playing an increasingly important role in people’s life.

2.Through the________,people can________and________

3.But just as a coin has two sides,________First,________Second,________Finally,________

4.Therefore,________The best policy,as I see it,is to________

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________is playing an increasingly important role in people‘s life.

As a________,________has made________Besides,________Through the________,people can________and________

But just as a coin has two sides,________First,________Second,________Finally,________

Therefore,________The best policy,as I see it,is to________

Directions:For this part,you are allowed 30minutes to write a composition on the topic“Water Shortage”.You composition should be based on your own understanding of the topic and it should be no less than 150words.

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Water Shortage

No one can have failed to notice the fact that water shortage is a grave problem with which the whole world is confronted.Actually,it has become so widespread that it has severely affected people’s daily life and hindered the development of the global economy.

A number of factors could account for the problem,but the following might be the critical ones.First,with the development of agriculture and industry,an increasing amount of water is needed.Secondly,the ever-increasing population is another leading cause of water shortage.Besides,the global tendency of warming up also contributes to the problem.What‘s worse,pollution and waste of fresh water aggravate the situation.

In view of the seriousness of the problem,effective measures must be taken before things get worse.First,it is essential that laws and regulations be worked out and enforced to protect water resources.Secondly,people should enhance their awareness of saving water.With these measures taken,it is reasonable for us toexpect a brighter future.

妙语评析:这是篇说明水资源短缺的文章。第一段先说明每个人都意识到了水资源短缺的问题,然后开始列举造成这一问题的原因,最后一段又阐述防止其恶化的办法,呼吁提高全民环保意识。

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1.No one can have failed to notice the fact that________

2.Actually,________

3.A number of factors could account for the problem,but the following might be the critical ones.First,________Besides,________What’s worse,________

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No one can have failed to notice the fact that________

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