登陆注册
48281500000023

第23章 模板作文赏析(7)

There is some truth in both arguments.But it is Iikely to do more harm than good,if you maintain that it is the only thing to do at that night.Some more meaningful things can be found easily,such as parties,sharing views with families,etc..Obviously,there is little doubt that further attention will be paid on this issue.

(2006.12CET-4)

妙语评析:这是一篇关于社会生活类话题的利弊议论文。按照提纲的要求此篇文章分了三个部分。文章有许多闪光点,在套用模板的基础上有所突破。文中用黑体标出的句子是文章的闪光点,使文章的内容更加生动。

句型模板

1.First,they think that_________.

2.What’more,some feel that_________.

3.But others do not agree.

4.Moreover,they argue that_________.

全文模板

Topic

Some people are in favor of_________.Those who Iike it_________.First,they think that_________.What‘more,some feel that_________.Besides,it is said that_________.

But others do not agree.Firstly,they say that_________.Moreover,they argue that_________.

There is some truth in both arguments.But it is Iikely to_________.Some more meaningful things_________,such as_________Obviously,there is Iittle doubt that_________.

Directions:For this part,you are allowed 30minutes to write a short essay on the topic of Students selecting their Iecturers.You should write at Ieast 120words following the outline given below.

1.有些大学允许学生自由选择某些课程的任课教师。

2.学生选择教师时所考虑的主要因素。

3.学生自选任课教师的益处和可能产生的问题。

范文欣赏

Students selecting their lecturers

Nowadays,there is a general discussion today about the issue of some changes on campus.Particularly,students in universities have optional choices on their teachers.

A number of factors are responsible for decisions in choosing teachers.For one thing,the character of a lecturer plays a significant role in this issue,which means the teacher should meet the learners’taste.For another thing,opinions from other students are likely to bring effects on the decision.In other words,we are possibly influenced by negative or positive words from others.

Obviously,there is no consensus of opinions among people as to the view of this matter.On the one hand,students are treated better than before.On the other hand,some top teachers will be ignored,if they are not able to please the market.From what has been discussed above,we may safely draw the conclusion that further attention will be paid to this matter.

(2006.6CET-4)

妙语评析:这是一篇现象评论类议论文。由于提纲所给的框架十分清晰,此文开篇就引出了该现象。第二段陈述了选择老师时所考虑的因素,使用了For one thing……For another thing……In other words……这样此段落中心突出,层次分明。最后一段指出了该做法的好处以及可能的问题,语言的概括性也恰到好处。文中用黑体标出的句子是作文中常用到的可以使文章结构清楚的句式。

句型模板

1.A number of factors are responsible for_________.

2.In other words,_________.

3.Obviously,there is no consensus_________.

4.From what has been discussed above,we may_________.

全文模板

Topic

Nowadays,there is_________.Particularly,_________.

A number of factors are responsible for_________.For one thing,_________.For another thing,_________.In other words,_________.

Obviously,there is no consensus_________.On the one hand,_________.On the other hand,_________.From what has been discussed above,we may_________.

Directions:For this part,you are allowed 30minutes to write a short essay entitled Should the University Campus Be Open to Tourists?You should write at Ieast 120words following the outline given below:

1.名校校园正成为旅游新热点。

2.校园是否应对游客开放,人们看法不同。

3.我认为……

范文欣赏

Should the University Campus Be Open to Tourists?

Nowadays,some famous universities have become a hot tourist attraction.Many middle school students and ordinary tourists swarm into university campuses such as Beijing University and Qinghua University.They can enjoy the intellectual atmosphere there and also be a part of them.

When it comes to whether the university campus should be open to tourists,different people hold different views.Some argue that since most universities belong to the country,every citizen has a right to visit them.What‘s more,middle school students can have a good impression of the universities,which will set a definite goal for themselves.However,other people maintain that the visitors will distract the attention of teachers and students in universities;therefore,their visit should be banned.

As I see it,the visit brings people both benefits and harms.We should open most parts of universities to visitors;meanwhile,some private or important parts should not be opened.Only in this way can we satisfy both tourists and universities.

(2005.12CET-4)

妙语评析:这是一篇个人观点议论文。首先第一段指出了普遍存在的现象即名校校园正成为旅游新热点,很多游客喜欢去那里观光。第二段谈论了两种不同的观点,指出了校园开放既有利也有弊。第三段提出了自己的观点,并指出如何解决这个问题。以only引起的倒装句作为结尾句,更能加强语气,突出自己的观点。文中用黑体标出的句子均为各段的主题句,起到了点睛的作用。

句型模板

1.Nowadays,_________have become a hot_________.

2.When it comes to_________,different people hold different views.

3.Some argue that_________.

4.However,other people maintain that_________;therefore,_________.

5.As I see it,_________.

全文模板

Topic

Nowadays,_________have become_________.They can enjoy_________there and also_________.

When it comes to_________,different people hold different views.Some argue that_________.What’s more,_________.However,other people maintain that_________;therefore,_________.

As I see it,_________.We should_________;meanwhile,_________.Only in this way can we satisfy both_________.

Directions:For this part,you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic Is a Test of Spoken English Necessary?The first sentence has already been written for you.You should write at Ieast 100words,and base your competition on the outline given in Chinese below:

1.很多人认为有必要举行英语口语考试,理由是……

2.也有人持不同意见,……

3.我的看法和打算。

范文欣赏

Is a Test of Spoken English Necessary?

同类推荐
  • 英语PARTY——高地之邦·苏格兰

    英语PARTY——高地之邦·苏格兰

    本套书籍带你领略英语世界风景,感悟英语学习氛围,有助于英语学习。
  • 觉醒:The Awakening(英文朗读版)

    觉醒:The Awakening(英文朗读版)

    Kate Chopin (1850–1904) was an American author of short stories and novels based in Louisiana. She is now considered by some scholars to have been a forerunner of American 20th-century feminist authors of Southern or Catholic background, such as Zelda nuoha.com Awakening was first published in 1899. Set in New Orleans and on the Louisiana Gulf coast at the end of the 19th century. It is widely seen as a landmark work of early feminism, generating a mixed reaction from contemporary readers and critics. The novel's blend of realistic narrative, incisive social commentary, and psychological complexity makes The Awakening a precursor of American modernist literature; it prefigures the works of American novelists such as William Faulkner and Ernest Hemingway and echoes the works of contemporaries such as Edith Wharton and Henry James. Chopin did not write another novel after The Awakening and had difficulty publishing stories after its release. When she died five years later, she was on
  • 英国学生科学读本

    英国学生科学读本

    《英国学生科学读本》是一套英国学生曾经使用的原版科学教材。作者尝试从孩子身边不起眼的细小事物开始,让他们自己走进奇妙的科学殿堂。这套科学读本犹如一部生动有趣的万物简史,书中提到的事物,都是人们天天可见的:狗、猫、麦子、铁、煤、铅笔、大头当然,有些是当地特有的东西,比如英国的硬币——便士。这些内容看起来平常得很,但每篇文章背后都关联着相应的专业科学,让读者学到丰富而有用的知识。《英国学生科学读本》的最后,还收录了一些优美的英语诗歌,描述了身边美丽的自然现象和孩子们的日常活动。对中国读者来讲,此书可谓一套多功能的英语读本。
  • 看见老外就能聊

    看见老外就能聊

    本书由国内篇和国外篇组成,其中国内篇收录了孔子儒学、四大发明、书法的艺术等内容;国外篇收录了圣诞节的起源与庆祝、感恩节、你没听说过的英国王室趣闻等内容。
  • 心是孤独的猎手(双语译林)

    心是孤独的猎手(双语译林)

    《心是孤独的猎手》是美国女作家卡森·麦卡勒斯代表作,小说通过变换叙事角度的方法,描述了一群徘徊于孤独的人们。故事发生于20世纪30年代的一个美国南方小镇,主要围绕主人公——哑巴辛格,以及他身边的人物展开。辛格的沉默疏离让他在人们眼中蒙上了一层神秘睿智的色彩,人们试图向辛格倾诉内心,但辛格根本无法理解他们,转而把全部的感情筹码压在了安东尼帕罗斯身上。直到安东尼帕罗斯去世,他也离开了这个世界。
热门推荐
  • 我最想要的形象礼仪书:做优雅有礼的得体女人

    我最想要的形象礼仪书:做优雅有礼的得体女人

    在现代生活中,女人们从服饰打扮、举止言谈、气质风度、文明礼貌等各个方面在做着尽善尽美的改变,因为这一切的细节都可能决定着她们的前程和命运。沿着古老的文明走到今天,女性已逐渐由幕后走到了台前,越来越多的社会生活需要女性参与、融人乃至主导,因此对女性的形象礼仪也提出了新的要求。女人们也用自身独特的形象礼仪为这个世界缔造着温暖和美丽。
  • 宠物小精灵之伊布传

    宠物小精灵之伊布传

    一只伊布一出生就遇到灾难,家人被人类捉走,逃亡到一片森林,在此修炼,为了家人与目标,他开始了学习,旅行。。。。
  • 我的沉浸小说攻略

    我的沉浸小说攻略

    化身沉浸小说的主人翁,借助新型体验仓,在沉浸小说的世界中遨游,攻略原剧情,创造新剧情!首本沉浸小说之《浮空牢狱》。本书主打奇幻类型的小说......
  • 魔影仙踪:萌兔修炼记

    魔影仙踪:萌兔修炼记

    最是情劫难修度,身陷其中难自制。痴情却被专情负,深情又被无情负。你修仙为了情,而我却是为了你。我失去了一切,只为了最后,能站在你的身旁。
  • 天行

    天行

    号称“北辰骑神”的天才玩家以自创的“牧马冲锋流”战术击败了国服第一弓手北冥雪,被誉为天纵战榜第一骑士的他,却受到小人排挤,最终离开了效力已久的银狐俱乐部。是沉沦,还是再次崛起?恰逢其时,月恒集团第四款游戏“天行”正式上线,虚拟世界再起风云!
  • 胭脂疆场

    胭脂疆场

    一番阴差阳错,误了多少深情。一个不得不娶,为的是保下全族性命,却不知得罪了当朝太子一个不得不嫁,只因为一旨千里赐婚,却不知误会了心上情郎自古只有孽缘,才当断不能断。两人本皆心有别属,怎奈何一个俊朗如松,一个翩翩如兰,又都在多情年岁,日日相见朝与夕,怎能不生爱?可若言爱,这许多胭脂女子,那其间姐妹疆场,同族骨肉尚且反目,争那胜败!宦海浮沉,荣辱兴衰,几多纠葛,多少是非,情之一字,何其轻!=每晚20:00更新。如果周末加更,会在当天下午16:00左右。
  • 御史馋猫都察院

    御史馋猫都察院

    他叫聂小蛮,是金陵的巡城御史,七行俱下、颖悟绝伦。而他叫苏景墨,身穿飞鱼服,手提绣春刀,目达耳通、飒爽英姿,大明锦衣卫的便是。聂小蛮进了门来,一边转身轻轻地把门关上,一边把手按在景墨的肩上。小蛮低声问道:“你的头痛好些吗?”接着瞧见了景墨手中的十字短剑,又诧异道:“怎么回事?你拿了这玩意儿要刺谁?”景墨呆住了,一时答不出话来,只是向聂小蛮呆呆地看着。小蛮的面色也变得不安起来,他的惊讶的目光也目不转睛地注视着景墨。景墨吓了一大跳,担心对方是不是已经瞧出自己的破绽来了?但他仍强自镇定,索性再大咳一声,然后大着胆子问道。“刚才嘴里被灌了几口风,血虚寒凝,筋脉挛缩,所以咳起嗽来,自然声音就有些儿哑。喂,你此刻住在哪里?”那人惊呀道:“什么!你竟然忘了?昨天我不是和你才说好的?”
  • 防弹少年团之失忆瞬间

    防弹少年团之失忆瞬间

    没有曾经没有我们。一次相见,终身爱上还有田正国你在乱来。。我就。。某人邪笑你就怎样我就喊。。喊妈妈!!(本文与真人无关请勿上升真人)
  • 毒后驾到,渣皇靠边站

    毒后驾到,渣皇靠边站

    前世,甜言蜜语,蒙住了她的眼,识人不清,落得惨死!今生,涅槃归来,她誓要千倍奉还!他说:苏漫雪,你还知道廉耻二字怎么写吗?”她说:皇上,不好意思,先生没教!他说:你是皇后,却跟男人勾勾搭搭,成何体统!她说:那请问皇上,你为什么可以三宫六院,本宫不能美男三千?他说:因为我是皇上!她说:那我是皇后!他说:天下是朕的,朕说了算!她说:是吗?那本宫把天下毁了,都听本宫的!
  • 天行

    天行

    号称“北辰骑神”的天才玩家以自创的“牧马冲锋流”战术击败了国服第一弓手北冥雪,被誉为天纵战榜第一骑士的他,却受到小人排挤,最终离开了效力已久的银狐俱乐部。是沉沦,还是再次崛起?恰逢其时,月恒集团第四款游戏“天行”正式上线,虚拟世界再起风云!